Crush Poem

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When Will You Notice Me

© Kayla
What do I have to do to get you to notice me?
Change my hair, the way I walk.
My clothes, the way I talk.
We've known each other for some time now
yet I'm still invisible to you.
My feelings run deep and how
I wish you only knew.
I see your face every time I close my eyes
To me you just seem so different from the other guys.
To you I'm just a friend
Nothing more, nothing less
I settle for friendship in the end
Because I don't want to make a mess.
Instead I'll keep my secret to myself
And take my pride back off the shelf.
Until one day you finally see
That you and I were meant to be.
I'll wait for now but not too long
Because sooner or later I'll be gone.
So when will you notice me?

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Published: Sep 2011
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  1. Shimy, Kissimmee Fl Submitted on Saturday, June 23, 2012

    I love this poem. ' really cool it actually inspired me so much that I showed this poem to my crush and he loved it! Then like two days later he asks me out!!! I was so happy!

    Thanks for writing this poem!
    You rock!!!:)

  2. Sade Stewart, Chicago Illnois Submitted on Monday, July 09, 2012

    I went through this same situation with my friend, it's like what do I have to do for this boy to recognize me. I said to myself do I have to change everything about me, for he can recognize me because this ain't working right. I did thing's for this person to notice me & he did at times. But every girl try to get in his way & asking question, & they asking me question like what's going on, I just say it in a funny smile way & be fun by saying it. It's not they business anyway I like your poem Kayla keep writing these type of poem I like this.

  3. Aubrey, London Submitted on Monday, July 09, 2012

    HI I wanted to make a song out of this poem. I'm just 15 but I really like it, I'll mention you in the video on YouTube please

  4. Mary,Landover Maryland Submitted on Monday, September 10, 2012

    This has really touched me I feel the same way about someone I know but he doesn't notice me at all.

  5. Jennifer, United States Submitted on Sunday, October 21, 2012

    I have this big crush on my best friend and we used to like each other but I don't think he likes me anymore. I've been writing poems and this just really inspired me because maybe if I show him this he will get what I am trying to say! Please keep writing these types of poems!

  6. Wafa, United Kingdom Submitted on Thursday, January 17, 2013

    It's like amazing...this is what I want to tell to my crush...it have been 4 years I have been waiting to him...hope this poem will make a end to my hope :)

  7. K.Lee Submitted on Sunday, May 05, 2013

    This poem is really good I'm a teen and I can relate to it. I think most teens go through the same phase I'm going through, please keep on writing more of these poems.

  8. Shardai, United Kingdom Submitted on Monday, September 30, 2013

    I've had a crush on this boy in my school and he knows I like him but I've always wondered if he notices me. I'm in year nine now and he's in all of my classes and he's my friend and I haven't talked to him for ages and this poem has helped me a lot and I might just show it to him :)

  9. Diamond,California Submitted on Saturday, November 30, 2013

    This really made me happy and inspired because there is this boy who I have liked for three years and his name is Xavier and I know him and he knows me and he knows that I like him but sometimes he acts like he doesn't remember me so I feel like I could do anything but I still don't wanna ask him to go out with me because I feel like it would be weird and that I will be sad at the end but I feel like I will have to move on because it didn't happen and it probably never happen any way so I gotta move on.

  10. Amber Rider Submitted on Friday, January 17, 2014

    This poem has touched me because there is this guy named John-Michael and he has had my heart. I wouldn't call us friends, but there is the every once in a while "Hey! How are you?" This poem has told what almost every teen girl goes though. I have had a crush on JM for sometime now but he has a girl friend. I don't know what to do. He is perfect and I am a geek.

  11. Charlize Submitted on Monday, May 12, 2014

    This is soooooooo cute but can you write a poem about this guy liking a girl please, I am in such a situation that I don't know what to do, I like this one guy that doesn't like me back and then there's this other guy that makes me feel really special but I don't know what to do...........

    Your poems are really cool

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