Alone Poem

From: Moriah, 12 yrs old, To: the McPherson family.

The Pain I Feel Inside

© Moriah McPherson
The pain that I feel so deep inside,
The hurt, the shame, and all the lies.
People that I live with thought they would be the people that I love,
With the hate, the anger, the yelling, the teasing, and the madness.
The more that I cry, the more I think there is no love.
When I go to school they always talk about me,
When I come home thatís not where I want to be.
Sometimes I feel I don't want to be in this world,
If someone shot me I wonder how they would feel,
Happy, mad, or pretend that they are sad.
The pain that I feel so deep inside,
The hurt, the shame, and all the lies.

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Published: Jun 2007
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  1. Sanghamitra Ghosh Submitted on Thursday, August 21, 2008

    I feel the same way as many people here...lonely and unloved

  2. nicki Submitted on Saturday, September 27, 2008

    I don't know who you are but this poem is so me I feel like this but its not even half of what I feel.....

  3. nicola Submitted on Wednesday, December 10, 2008

    what a sad poem to write for such a young little girl. I'm a mum and your poem touched me so much you sound so unhappy. I hope you learn to smile again soon. x x

  4. Jenna Submitted on Saturday, December 13, 2008

    I Think this is a very true poem, that I could relate to in so many ways its a ill' bit how I feel..... I Think its really good and don't let no one tell you differently.

  5. olissa Submitted on Monday, January 26, 2009

    I know how you feel because I felt the same way a lot of times. I always felt that no one loved me and I always wondered how they would feel if I took my own life. would they be happy or sad. mad or glad, but then I realized that if I did that God would never forgive me and that even though it seems that they do not love me someone else does and that's God and that's all that counts.

  6. Jennifer Submitted on Wednesday, March 25, 2009

    Hey,Wow is all I can really say about this poem. It has a lot of meaning to it and I personally do believe many many people could relate to your poem I know me and my friends have. I hope you don't mind but I let my teacher read it to the class. They all starting to think and there are so many people that are saying there sorry to the people they bullied and hurt. And made feel unloved, unwanted, unreal. Anyways thanks for posting your poem it did make a difference.

  7. Katie, KY Submitted on Tuesday, December 01, 2009

    I know exactly how you feel just put you r faith in god and he will take care of it all !!

    xoxo

  8. Aristotelis Courcoubetis Submitted on Sunday, March 21, 2010

    The pain that I feel inside... The poem of yours reflects to some extent the alienation I feel in my life at some points. The thing that keeps me going is the desire I have to turn things around and prove that life is not about pain and suffering. Life is about happiness and joy. Be strong and don't let anyone take this desire away for you. Do it for you and nobody else.

  9. Jessa Marie, Ario LA Submitted on Tuesday, September 07, 2010

    The poem of yours reflects so much to me.. we have the same feeling that I want to heal sooner.. hope God will help us.. I know he's always there.. stay safe and happy..

  10. Lisa Submitted on Monday, November 22, 2010

    I'm always crying inside. the poem helped me understand and explain exactly what I was feeling, without being misunderstood. thank you!

  11. Cierra Submitted on Sunday, January 09, 2011

    I know how you feel. It's how I feel right now. I think it's natural for some people. Like swimming is to others. Or talking. I hope you find some one to help you though.

  12. Stephanie,Washington Submitted on Friday, May 06, 2011

    I am twenty three and I've lived with this feeling since I was thirteen from a terrible incident . I've been feeling this way for at least a decade. I would hold it in and try to deal with it and in reality I haven't. It took ten years to finally let all this built up emotions out and finally going to get the professional help I need. I'm just saying that trying to deal with it on your own, it won't help. You need your friends, family, pastor or other help. It's good that you're expressing yourself now. Just know you're not alone .

  13. Linzay, WV Submitted on Friday, November 25, 2011

    I know how you feel I don't feel wanted anywhere since my Granny died in October of 2009. She was my best and only true friend at school I would think of how I was going to go to her house after school but now I don't feel wanted anywhere at school. I get teased because I wear glasses and I keep to myself more than I think I should but thanks for reading and letting me get that out there bye

  14. Moriah Mcpherson Submitted on Saturday, January 28, 2012

    Thanks to you all I appreciate all of your concerns and comments, but thanks to God I truly don't feel the same and he is close to my heart. I hope to all that still feel this way know that god loves you and there is no one greater higher or better. I will keep you in my prayers and will always keep believing that you will find what we all need and that is God himself

    I love you and so does the father in heaven

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