Crush Poem

Some may think it's just a poem by a teenager in lust. Yes, it's corny and exaggerated. However, it's not an excuse to talk about a crush. I've only met him once. For me, this poem means something, because I wrote it in the midst of my confusion about my strong feelings. I barely know the guy, yet, and this is cliche, I can't get him out of my mind. I'm usually very casual with guys, but I had to try really hard to act normal. It seems like a love poem, but I can say "good times" reading it.

Love? No. Fate? I Think So

© Tammy Luu
I knew the day we met
That we were meant to be
I knew our fate was set
That you were the one for me

I didn't even know you
I only knew your name
I wasn't sure what to do
I didn't know who to blame

I knew I thought you attractive
I could tell that you were nice
The butterflies were so active
That I couldn't think twice

Everything I did that day
Didn't show you who I am
Every time you came my way
My heart began to ram

My actions weren't natural
My reactions weren't real
I felt so very terrible
But my heart I did not wield

And when the group said goodbye to me
My eyes were fixed on you
I knew I was trying to see
If you felt the same way too

I liked you when I saw your face
But maybe it was the touch
My heart had begun to race
I already liked you too much

I knew the day we met
That we were meant to be
I knew our fate was set
As friends, as lovers, as enemies

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Published: Nov 2011
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7 Stories on "Love? No. Fate? I Think So"
  1. Abby Submitted on Saturday, February 11, 2012

    This is amazing, I met this boy at camp and this was how I felt the whole time! Thank you so much for writing this!

  2. Katy Submitted on Wednesday, July 11, 2012

    I have a crush on one of my brothers friends, but he is in 5th grade and I'm in 7th. It really makes me sad and I doubt he really likes me in that way. but he thinks all the same ways I do and he backs me up. He is one of those people that you miss after they leave. but now I'm not sure if I love him or if we are just friends. I guess I really haven't thought about it. not that I would mind if he loved me:) [I have only met him during an hour-long car ride to take them to boyscout camp]

  3. Jessica , Texas Submitted on Saturday, November 03, 2012

    There is this guy at school I like. He knows I like him. But he has never said he liked me or anything. I doubted our friendship and whether or not he was playing me. Some say he is and some say he is not. We are friends and I don't know if he likes me back. He keeps on touching me and smiling at me at random moments, but I still am afraid that he likes my friend. Every girl likes him, but not the way I do! He knows I am special so, does he like me? I do not know...

  4. Shanny, New York Submitted on Monday, April 08, 2013

    There is this guy I like, he is like my best friend, and probably the greatest guy I've met. He is super sweet, charming, HILARIOUS, and so so smart. Well he has become my best friend and we are really close. Anyone who talks to us or doesn't know us very well thinks that we are going out. I like him so much but I don't know what he thinks of me. I'm scared to ask because I don't know If I'll like the answer...

  5. Melissa,Texas Submitted on Monday, May 20, 2013

    I have a crush on a boy in the other six grade class. I think he is cute but I don't know if he likes me or not. I try to talk to him except I never know what to say. This poem is actually how I feel about him.

  6. Taylor, Waycross Submitted on Sunday, February 02, 2014

    Me to Katy. I have a crush on a 5th grader and I'm in the 7th grade. I don't know if he likes me though. He knows I like him but he has a girlfriend. He is so sweet and cute. I can't barely even talk to him because I don't know what to say. What should I do??????

  7. Jessica, Utah Submitted on Thursday, February 13, 2014

    My story is going to be like all the others out there. I like this guy at school, and when I first met him, I liked him immediately but I acted like I hated him. I regret that now, because I really like him, but I am not really friends with him so we can't talk that much. He is so hot! Imagine a guy with perfect dark-ish skin, brown eyes, dark brown hair, and a perfect personality. We both get good grades, we both think the exact same way, we both have never watched a Super Bowl in our entire life; we have tons of similarities and it would take like five pages to list them all. He is like the boy version of me! ( except I have blonde hair and light skin and blue eyes) I have been going crazy trying to get him to notice me, or at least talk to me every once in a while. I think it's working because in one of my classes with him, he always turns around and talks to me. I resist the urge to tell him how I really feel, because I am afraid he will laugh in my face. Also, my whole grade thinks I like a different guy, and he likes me so I don't want to hurt his feelings or make him hate me.

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