Falling in Love Poem

In Love With You

This is about my boyfriend. We've broken up now and it was hard, it really did tear me up so I wanted to post this poem as a sort of memory of what we used to be. enjoy...

You

© Danni
You're always in my thoughts
You're always in my dreams
And so a life without you would
Just tear away at the seams

It's you that keeps me up all night
The one getting me through the day
And so it seems to me that there
Is only one thing left to say

I don't know how to say it
To make it sound so true
So I'll say it how I feel it
I'm completely in love with you

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Published: Apr 2009
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  1. Meghan, Windsor Submitted on Saturday, November 14, 2009

    I had been best friends with my neighbor. We spent long hours on the telephone at night and texted each other during the day, when one day he told me he loved me. I had thought he was kidding yet he seemed so serious. He never let it go. He asked me out on a date and I had to say no thinking that it would ruin our relationship as best friends. When I said no he moved on liking two other girls, now he doesn't talk to me. Even though I said no, our relationship we had is ruined.

  2. Autumn, Cleveland, Oh Submitted on Tuesday, May 08, 2012

    There was this boy that came to my school. His name was John. At first I didn't really like him, but as time went on I started to really like him. Then he asked me out and I said yes. We were going out for a little over a month. We would text each other everyday and night. On weekends we would talk all night. Then one way we were at lunch in school and the security guard took him to the office. I was freaking out because after lunch my friend Isaiah told me that he had weed that he found in the bathroom and the security guard knew about it. So of course he was suspended, but only for 10 days. So 10 days goes by and he doesn't come back to school. So, I was like what's going on? Again, Isaiah knew and he told me that John had gotten expelled and that he could possibly go to jail. He went to court and fortunately he wasn't sent to jail. And then we broke up because during all this we didn't really see each other that much. I was heartbroken but didn't show it because all my friends thought it was better that me and him weren't together because they said he was a pothead. He's not addicted or anything though. We didn't talk for like a month and then he called me one day, then we started texting again. he told me that he still had a lot of feelings for me and that he would go back out with me. and I feel the same way, only difference is that I'm in love with him...What should I do..??

  3. Karen, Kent Submitted on Thursday, October 25, 2012

    I have a story about the guy I'm with. I can't tell him how I feel because with his autism he wouldn't understand. I have tried but he doesn't seem to know what I'm on about :( it's hard for me but I'll fight for him all the way .. My boyfriends addicted to weed and he does try to get off it but he can't it's hard but it's okay cause he's not paranoid or anything but he can get a little depressed sometimes but he does the most sweetest things for me so for someone who doesn't understand how I feel about them why would he do such sweet things for me ? I guess that I maybe just don't understand
    :/

    And if you love someone it's always worth a second go !

  4. Kayla, Florida Submitted on Wednesday, November 13, 2013

    So there's this boy. I've liked him since 4th grade. We were always friends but I never told him how I felt. I got really jealous in 8th grade because we started talking then I found out he got a girlfriend. They went out for 2 years, but they fought a lot so they ended it. He texted literally a month after. And we started talking again. I was so excited because I finally got my chance. He's honestly been the best thing for me because nobody has ever cared and tried for so long to keep me in their life. He tells me he loves me every chance he gets. He holds me in his arms and squeezes me as tight as it gets. I sneak out to see him even though I've never done that for anyone else. But it's the least I can do because he says I love you. I asked him the other day why I mean so much to him. He told me, "you get me like nobody else, nobody has ever tried to keep a smile on my face. You hate it when I'm upset and so do I because I know I take it out on you. Idk why you love me so much. But I'm telling you right now once we're older and out of school. I'm putting a ring on your finger and never letting you go."

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