Betrayed Friend Poem

Hurt By Best Friend Poem

I wrote this poem when my best friend betrayed me a year ago. It's the worst pain I've ever felt, cause I really loved her.

The Universes Of Hurt

© Marthe
I gave you happiness
You accepted it
I offered you care
You embraced it
I gave you love
You accepted it
I gave you a lot
But you took everything

I asked for happiness
You hurt me
I asked for care
You ignored me
I asked for love
You pushed me away
I asked for a little
But you kept it all

I gave you the possibility
To hurt me deeply
When I loved you
You took an advantage of that

You're not dead
In this real
Cruel world

But in my heart
You no longer exist
There is just
A hole
As deep and powerful
As our friendship
Once was

Once upon a time
Up there
With the universes
The universe
Of all the things
I'd like to forget


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Published: Nov 2011
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  1. Jessica, Tx Submitted on Sunday, November 04, 2012

    Exactly what has happened to me. He accepted me but never gave anything back in return. I think of him everyday but, he has always has been thinking about my other friend. I hadn't known and he knows I'm a fool for him. I have been crying and I might not go to school cause I am sick to my stomach about it!;(

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