Break Up Poem

My girlfriend is a girl who is 15. Smokes, drinks, and has sex with guys other then me. She likes to play mind games, control my life by knowing all my passwords and she breaks up with me a lot, which hurts me. So today when she said I need a break I said OK and wrote a poem about it. She has cheated on me approximately 9 times and I have been faithful the whole time we were dating, which is around 5 months.

Hard Times

Richard Shuman February 15 at 8:21pm

You know I canít go on with any regret
Our relationship is hard like a game of roulette
We're off and on so constantly
And you cheating... Come on, honestly.

This is a hard thing to say but needs to be said
I canít go on being with youÖ sometimes I'd rather be dead
You treat me so bad and make me cry
Donít worry anymore, no need to lie.

You have hurt me a lot and I want you to know
I will never love you again so let me go
Iíve made up my mind, Iíve made my choice
I soon will be happy and able to rejoice.

Itís over now you should think long and hard
Maybe next time you wonít cheat and be a retard
I loved you so much and you acted like normal
You even got yourself a date to the Valentines Formal.

I treated you no less than my queen
You went behind my back and f*cked someone 18
You lost my trust you broke my heart
Now I need to reboot and maybe restart.

You drink too much and cheat even more
I hate you so much youíre a cheap filthy whore
You hurt me so bad and it makes me sick
So itís over bitch, you can suck on my dick.

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Published: Feb 2011
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  1. Jenna, New York Submitted on Sunday, February 27, 2011

    you really opened my eye, I turn to poetry for help with everything. I am sad to say I'm just like your 15 year old girl. I am a 15 year old girl myself and do all of that. My boyfriend tells me what you wrote all the time but now I really understand how disgusting I was to him when he was just trying to help me.

  2. Telie Submitted on Wednesday, March 16, 2011

    Wow dude your really open about that I have a friend just like that and she is the same way I love the poem now I can read it to her and maybe help her and try to fix stuff with her and her bf which is my best friend just the other day he came crying to me asking me for my help and I tried to talk to her but she was so high that she didn't even know I was there. I love this.

  3. Sebrina Prucell Submitted on Wednesday, April 06, 2011

    I love that poem it was nice. That just means you can do a lot better than her and you don't need her and you can go on and love someone else. that loves you the same as you do.

  4. Mary, Chicago Submitted on Monday, June 13, 2011

    I liked this poem a lot parts of this poem reminds me about my so called ex boyfriend we've was together less than a month like approximately almost 3 weeks but I've known him for about two or three yrs I'm 19 he's 22 but overall you have a lot of hurt built up inside of you like me it's gonna be ok I just wish someone can tell me the same, enough for me to believe it even though I've been hurt 6 times. but you went hard on this poem.

  5. Angel, Tx Submitted on Monday, August 15, 2011

    I'm so sorry. I'm glad you're letting her go, you deserve so much more... Just keep your head up. Hah I'm only 15 but I've been hurt throughout my whole life in relationships with friends, family, and lovers.... But it gets better in time, and next time you get into such a relationship, leave the first chance you get. It is not good for you physically and mentally.. Keep loving yourself and keep the faith. You'll find her one day.. Thank you for sharing this... =)
    sincerely, Angel <3

  6. Rhianna, Texas Submitted on Monday, October 17, 2011

    Whoa I have a very similar story but I told his to f*ck off in front of the whole school :) now I found a guy who is gonna treat me faithfully and we have been dating for almost a year.......don't worry you're going to find the perfect girl for you (unless you already found her) but either way somebody is gonna love you no matter what.

  7. Marlynn, Michigan:) Submitted on Sunday, April 01, 2012

    Damn you have a really big heart I'm glad you finally broke it off with her she doesn't deserve to have you.:)

  8. Babygurl, AZ Submitted on Thursday, April 12, 2012

    Hey. I'm 13 my boyfriend has done the same thing to me twice.. Tomorrow I think I'll prove he doesn't own me and I'm not his puppet. Thank you...

  9. Kayla, NY Submitted on Sunday, July 29, 2012

    MY boyfriend of 4 years cheated on me he smiled in my face every day and turned around and slept with a 16 year old

  10. Yas, Georgia Submitted on Monday, October 15, 2012

    Me and you are going thru the same. Me and my boyfriend been together for 5 months on and off too. All he does is cheat behind my back and I have also been faithful but it's just a time to let go of him. Oh yeah he's 17 and all over this 13 year old girl who acts/look like she's 49. Crazy right?

  11. Anny Banany Submitted on Wednesday, March 13, 2013

    This is such a great poem. It reminds me of a rap song - the kind of stuff that Eminem would write. Have you thought about making a song out of it?

  12. Kittly Submitted on Wednesday, March 20, 2013

    She doesn't deserve you! if you've been loyal for 5 months and she sleeps around there is obviously something wrong! But keep in mind you shouldn't break her heart back! I'm not making excuses but isn't that just doing what she did to you?

  13. Tykira, Savanna Georgia Submitted on Saturday, May 18, 2013

    Once I read your introduction, I realized how you felt. You have my sympathy and my attention WHENEVER you write a poem. Reading the last 2 stanzas reminded me of when my boyfriend cheated on me. He told the truth right after he did it but it was unacceptable........anyways I love this poem. keep it up, I'd love to read more!!!!

  14. Damontay Submitted on Tuesday, December 17, 2013

    This poem make me happy because my boyfriend just cheated on me and it hurts when he put that picture of him and this other girl. It hurt me I wanted to cry, every night I think of him. I wish we can back be together again. My heart is hopeless and empty he was gone for mad long but the Lord is on my side to keep my head up high and stay strong. I would be a great role model keep him on his best but I love him I don't know what I did wrong just give me a chance I'll keep you staying strong, live you in a right place.

  15. Richard Shuman Submitted on Sunday, January 05, 2014

    Wow I haven't been on this site in years but reading the comments and seeing how much my poem affected all of you was a pretty big surprise and I'm going to start putting my other poetry up on here for all of you to read and give feedback on. The girl this poem was based on hasn't been in touch since this went up and sadly I haven't had a real relationship since this girl but I've met someone and am taking it slow so hoping for the best.

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