Falling in Love Poem

This a poem to a Guy I used to be completely in love with...he actually used me so now we don't talk but I still love this poem I wrote so I thought I would put it out for the world to see, hope you like it:)

Boy, You Leave Me Breathless

© Mackenzie
I fall harder and harder each day,
by every single word you say,

Your one of a kind,
you make my fly,

When I'm with you time stops,
I've never felt this way,

We argue and fight,
but I can't stay mad cause I'm in love,

You're driving me wild,
And I'm holding on.

You're The only thing I look forward to in the morning,
I'm falling so hard so fast I cant keep track,

There's something Special about you that I can't control myself from,
I'm loosing my mind,

My friends say forget about you,
you're not worth it,

I should listen to them,
I shouldn't trust you,

But baby, that's a risk I'm willing to take,
I need you like a Balloon needs air,

Your my oxygen baby,
But Boy, You're leaving me breathless.


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Published: Mar 2011
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  1. A Submitted on Monday, October 03, 2011

    Hey (:
    I guess I'm the first to comment on this poem... So here it goes.
    I'm a 10th grader- and you know what everyone says "There's plenty of fish in the sea." But no. There aren't. When your in love- your in love. So the story starts like this. Last year I met this guy- and it was just a crush. But eventually it grew to more and we dated. Then- BOOM! He broke up with me on my BIRTHDAY! But cheated on me for a WHOLE MONTH BEFORE!! Even now- with all the pain he put me through. The looks, the tears, and the heartache I still can't move on. It's been 8 months- I have classes with him, and yet people still feel the need to bring him up. My best friend and him are dating. I see them kiss in the hallway every day. I break into tears and run. I know the feeling of love. And no- it never goes away. And yet I'm still in love with him

  2. Lanay, Dallas Texas Submitted on Thursday, July 11, 2013

    I'm 20 years old I go to job corps I met this guy their an I never thought I would fall in love again because of what I had been through with my high school sweet heart over the years. Not only was this guy sweet but every moment we spent together I started getting deeper feelings for him ...but a lot of things where different about him ..he was not from America an he hardly knew any English ...which was a lot of hard work to get him to understand me it took him all the way to February 3 for him to tell me how he truely felt about me. I was shocked when he told me he was in love with me ...me an him has been together ever since even though we have are ups an downs but I couldn't be anymore happier with anyone else but him an this poem reminds me of us an I'm hoping we last a life time.

  3. Khalah White Submitted on Thursday, January 16, 2014

    I love this poem even if I'm just in the seventh grade because it fits how i feel about someone. It's crazy I know but it's true because when he say something not so nice I get over it like instantly.

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